Not bad dude. Definitely getting better. I would agree, though. The beat is just a bit off. Other than that it sounds nice.
Sounds good. I think that you have a small issue with levels. Some of
your channels are drowning out others that should be a bit more pronounced.
I can hear more in the background but it's too quiet. Try playing with your
levels for a more even mix.
Overall I really like it. I look forward to hearing more from you. Cheers :)
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